Rough draft of my book, First rough draft so be nice!

"It's seven o'clock on this beautiful Friday morning, the high today is in the seventy's and later on tonight we should be getting some rain in..."the announcer's voice was cut off as brad hit the snooze button on his alarm. He knew that he had to get up, but already he hated today. Most kids his age have been looking forward to this day for 4 years, but he hated the thought of graduating High School. Having to grow up, move on with life. Big decisions were coming up and his birthday was in, No! I'm not going to worry about that today, he thought quickly pulling his shirt over his head while heading downstairs to start on breakfast. As he was setting out mom's med's for the day he noticed that her iron supplements (note i have no idea what kind of medication she's on yet, but this one sounded good, lol) were getting low, he'd have to remember to stop at the pharmacy after... "WHAT ARE YOU DOING" the voice startling him, "this is a big day for you, you shouldn't be making breakfast!" "Oh mom, it's not that big of a deal" He said to her. "Living through four years of high school is a big deal brad." she said downing a glass of orange juice with her pills. He hated that she had to take so many but it was the only way of keeping her out of the hospital.

So that's it my first paragraph, lol it's only taken 4 months, lol tell me what you guys think of it, i'm not satisfied with it yet but it's a good start!

Mindy